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Passing a copywriting-sized kidney stone

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A real life, "chair squirming" copywriting lesson: A few years back, when I was still on the book of

A real life, "chair squirming" copywriting lesson: A few years back, when I was still on the book of Faces, I was reading the day-by-day adventures of a chick I knew from selling in the MLM market who was passing a kidney stone. It sounded excruciating too. I don’t remember how many days it took her to lay that egg and get it over with. But it sounded horrifying. It was also “world class” copywriting in action. Even though she wasn’t selling anything. And even though that was not her intent. How so? I know for a fact (others I know were also getting the play-by-play) I was not the only person watching, being filled with horror, and hoping to God Almighty that didn’t happen to us. Just as I know I was not the only one reading about her agony who found myself Googling’ the subject, spending money on specific kinds of supplements, making sure I’m getting enough water, checking to see my family history of kidney stones, looking up symptoms, causes, remedies, etc. Again, she wasn’t even selling anything. Yet, she definitely sold many of us, if’n you catch my drift. That’s copywriting at its finest, in my opinion: A vision of a problem, but that also offers to sell you a solution you’d crawl through a football field of broken glass to get your hands on, regardless of price, inconvenience, or difficulty. Not every market & product lends itself to this. Often the more clearly-defined & horrifying the pain (physical or otherwise), the more it applies. But that is the gist of it. And my best-selling Copy Slacker book — on sale for only a bit longer today — can give you a proven framework for going about selling in a way that can help your business get this kind of effect from your sales copy, in my experience. This big, heavy, 800+ page book ain’t cheap. And I certainly wouldn’t suggest letting it drop on your foot. But if you want it at the $200 discount off the listed price ($624 vs $824), then go to the URL below and buy it before tonight’s (Sunday 5/21 at midnight EDT) discount. Here is the link: [https∶//www.EmailPlayers.com/slacker]( Use code: ROPER at the checkout. Make sure you see the price change before entering your info. Ben Settle This email was sent by Ben Settle as owner of Settle, LLC. Copyright © 2023 Settle, LLC. All Rights Reserved. No part of this email may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without written permission from Settle, LLC. Click here to [unsubscribe]( Settle, LLC PO Box 1056 Gold Beach Oregon 97444 USA

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