And another free gift from Claude himself...
â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â â Great Claude Almighty⦠Mr. Scientific Advertising, himself (Claude Hopkins) is the one who introduced me to the world of the âOriginal Copy Legendsâ... And helped me discover my burning passion for old-school ads and copy. It all started⦠After I read his book, âScientific Advertising,â which youâve likely heard of. (Below, Iâll also show you how to get it â 100% FREE.) And today⦠Iâll be sharing the #1 lesson I learned from Claude â and how it cured one of my âlazy copy tendencies.â Alright, enough small talk. This lesson comes straight from Chapter 7 of Scientific Advertising, titled: âBeing Specific.â Here are the first two paragraphs: âPlatitudes and generalities roll off the human understanding like water from a duck. They leave no impression whatever. To say, âBest in the world,â âLowest price in existence,â etc. are at best simply claiming the expected. âBut superlatives of that sort are usually damaging. They suggest looseness of expression, a tendency to exaggerate, a carelessness of truth. They lead readers to discount all the statements that you make.â A simple concept, yes⦠But one that most copywriters overlook â me, amongst them, and even to this day⦠I find new opportunities to be more SPECIFIC. Hopkins goes on to explain: âPeople recognize a certain license in selling talk as they do in poetry. A man may say, âSupreme in qualityâ without seeming a liar, though one may know that other brands are equally as good. âOne expects a salesman to put his best foot forward and excuses some exaggeration born of enthusiasm. But just for that reason general statements count for little. And a man inclined to superlatives must expect that his every statement will be taken with some caution.â And to deepen the concept even further, he explains: âBut a man who makes a specific claim is either telling the truth or a lie. People do not expect an advertiser to lie. They know that he canât lie in the best mediums. The growing respect for advertising has largely come through a growing regard for its truth. âSo a definite statement is usually accepted. Actual figures are not generally discounted. Specific facts, when stated, have their full weight and effect.â Here are two examples from the new Copy Legends opt-in page: And here are 4 examples he gives (even there, I almost wrote âa fewâ): âSay that a tungsten lamp gives more light than a carbon and you leave some doubt. Say that it gives three and one-third times the light and people realize that you have made tests and comparisons.â ----- âA dealer may say, âOur prices have been reducedâ without creating any marked impression. But when he says, âOur prices have been reduced 25 percentâ he gets the full value of his announcement.â ----- âAt one time in the automobile business there was a general impression that profits were excessive. One well-advised advertiser came out with the statement, âOur profit is 9 percent.â Then he cited actual costs on the hidden parts of a $1,500 car. They amounted to $735, without including anything one could easily see. This advertiser made a great success along those lines at that time.â ----- âShaving soaps have long been advertised âAbundant lather,â âDoes not dry on the face,â âActs quickly,â etc. One advertiser had as good a chance as another to impress those claims. âThen a new maker came into the field. It was a tremendously difficult field, for every customer had to be taken from someone else. He stated specific facts. He said, âMultiplies itself in lather 250 times.â âSoftens the beard in one minute.â âMaintains its creamy fullness for ten minutes on the face.â âThe final result of testing and comparing 130 formulas.â Perhaps never in advertising has there been a quicker and greater success in an equally difficult field.â ----- By knowing this âmental modelâ⦠While writing your sales copy, youâll increase the credibility & believability of your message â a simple lesson with untold persuasive power. And this is only one of the lessons⦠Youâll discover once you own âScientific Advertising.â If you loved the lesson of Chapter 7 above, then youâll love many of the others (21 Chapters total.) [Want it? It's waiting for you here.]( to you learning how to deploy simplicity for maximum impact in your copy⦠Matt âNo Duck Water Hereâ Bockenstette ===== P.S. â When you tap the link above... Get a load of the brand new, updated Claude Hopkins Ad Collection that now includes 429 of his most legendary ads. P.P.S. â Iâve got a special treat for you: Your next email contains one of the greatest goddamn âOrigin Storiesâ of all the immortal ink-slingers. Itâs hard to believe itâs a true story. Keep an eye out for the subject line: âThe #1 Greatest Copywriter âOrigin Storyââ ==================== ð Wanna Win Free Shit? Share your link to invite copywriters to receive these Copy Legends emails: [( --- ð Wanna See All 10 Rewards? --- â
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