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[3 HOURS LEFT] Tough love: Don’t open if you’re easily offended.

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3 HOURS LEFT TO ENROLL IN EUI. After nito baka 1 year na naman antayin mo. ? If you’re

  3 HOURS LEFT TO ENROLL IN EUI. After nito baka 1 year na naman antayin mo. 😅 [>> Click here to join 2,300+ now <<]( If you’re not enrolled in EUI yet, I’m going to give you some tough love. Don’t proceed if you’re easily offended. (If you’re already enrolled, my emails are the HIDDEN BONUS you never asked for. HAHA! 😉) I’ve been thinking about whether I should send this or not for a few days now because I know that you might hate me after reading it. I’m taking a leap because I still wish someone had the courage to say this in front of my face before. You see, one of the courses I really really liked and believed could change my life was the course of Jon Orana about selling ebooks. It was just P12,000 when I saw it a few years ago. Now, it’s more or less P50,000 if I’m not mistaken. But you know what? Even if I could afford the enrollment fee at the time, I talked myself out of it. I convinced myself na hindi ko kailangan ‘yung course n’ya and na kaya ko mag-isa. (I’m not saying “barya” lang ‘yung P12,000 ah? Kaya ko siya ma-afford pero it was really expensive for me at that time.) So, I did it myself. Binasa ko ulit ‘yung favorite non-fiction books na meron ako to model what the authors did. Researched for hundreds of hours. Wrote the book. Hired someone who will convert my PDF to a .mobi (Kindle ebook) format. Published it on Amazon. After that… Bebenta ko na dapat. There was one problem though. … … … I didn’t know how to sell it. 🥲 Kala ko talaga yayaman na ako kasi kala ko ima-market ni Amazon ‘yung libro ko kasi bago siya. Imagine millions of Amazon visitors all over the world seeing my book… kahit ilang libo lang bumili nun puwede na ako mag-resign and write another book. 😅 Hindi pala ganun ‘yun. 😂😂😂 So I had to find a way to sell it online and that’s when I discovered copywriting. Anyways, hindi ko na papahabain ‘yung kuwento pero my point is… sana nag-enroll ako sa ebook-selling program na ‘yun. Sana nag-hire ako ng mentor. Baka mas maaga akong naka-resign from my job. Baka mas maaga akong nakabili ng bahay at lupa. Baka naging successful ako agad. Imagine this… 1. Hindi naman ako magugutom if nahulugan ako ng P12,000 habang naglalakad. Yes, masasaktan bulsa ko and mafu-frustrate ako kasi ang tanga tanga ko but still, I won’t go hungry. So… why the heck did I not take a chance on a program that would have changed my life?!?! 2. I wasn’t enrolled in any program that time na hindi ko pa natatapos. Hindi naman ako magtatapon ng pera kaka-kolekta ng courses na hindi ko kailangan. Makakapag-focus naman ako sa program na ‘yun if I enrolled. I’m more than willing to take action naman. Nagsarili nga ako ‘di ba? So… why the heck did I not enroll?!?! 3. I was super interested in selling ebooks to make money online. Ginawa ko na nga ‘di ba kahit mag-isa lang ako? Inabot din ako ng ilang buwan kaka-aral at kakasulat. It wasn’t just a Shiny-Object Syndrome na nawawala din ng mabilisan. I wasn’t just interested actually. I was committed. So… why the heck did I not enroll in that ebook-selling program?!?! 4. I didn’t have the skills to generate results for myself. So… why the heck did I not just invest P12,000 for my education and possibly ask for support from a mentor and/or a community? Hayyyyyy....... Naka move on naman na ako but whenever I think about it… may regret pa din kahit papano because… ...that one variable might have literally changed my life forever. I had made lame excuses like… “Kaya mo kapain ‘yan.” “Hindi mo kailangan mag-enroll. Malamang makikita mo sa YouTube ‘yan.” “Siya [Jon Orana] nga kinaya mag-isa eh. Ikaw pa kaya?!” Madami pa ‘yan. Haha! Anyways… When I saw EUI, I hesitated… AGAIN. 😅 Buti na lang I caught myself doing it again so on the LAST DAY of enrollment, I finally took the leap. The questions I listed above, I asked myself nung hindi ako makadecide whether to enroll or not. Now, here comes the tough love, {NAME}. You still have a chance to close this email. Still here? Great 😇 {NAME}, you have a HUGE problem if you’re not yet enrolled in EUI unless you’re one or more of these: 1. You don’t have at least P10,000 to spare. As in you’re going to get hungry the next month if you spend it somewhere else. Actually kahit nga P5750 lang kasi merong 2-pay option that would have made it easier for you – pero wala na ‘to ah? ‘Wag mo na hanapin sa’kin :P [But if hindi ka naman pala magugutom if mawalan ka ng P10,000 (which is a lot worse than investing it in yourself) why the heck haven’t you enrolled in EUI?!?!]( Maybe because of #2? 2. You still haven’t finished the program you enrolled in months ago. 😅 Well, ako mismo magdi-discourage sa’yo to enroll in another program without finishing the ones na nabubulok na sa hard drive mo. HAHAHA! (Unless iba na talaga ‘yung plan mo ah?) Actually, some of you emailed me asking for advice regarding this. I told them to NOT join EUI. Ewan ko lang kung nakinig sa’kin 😅 [But if wala ka namang program na hindi pa nakatambak lang sa kung saan... why the heck haven’t you joined almost one thousand email rebels?!?!]( Maybe because of #3? 3. You just enrolled in another program (regardless if it’s copywriting-related or not) and you want to focus on that first. Same with #2. You’re right to focus on that one. Don’t get FOMOed. Ignore this email. :) [But if you’re not enrolled in any programs right now… why the heck are you still reading this email and haven’t joined us yet?!?!]( Maybe because of #4? 4. You’re not interested in email copywriting Good job for knowing what you want. :) I’m just curious why you’re still reading this email kahit ang haba na nito. Anyways, If this is the case I’m curious about what you want to learn from me. Let me know by replying to this email. [But if you’re interested in email copywriting… why the heck haven’t you decided to become an email rebel like us?!?!]( Maybe because of #5? 5. You already have the skills to generate results for yourself or your clients. Maybe you’re just reading this as part of your routine. Or you want to add this to your swipe files. I don’t know what your plan is but if you say that you’re really confident that your skills are enough, I’m happy for you :) [But if you know deep inside you that your skills are lacking and you could achieve more… why the heck haven’t you hired John and Allan as your email copywriting mentors?!?!]( Again, if you’re at least one of the above, ako mismo magsasabi sa’yo NOT to enroll in EUI. :) Now, if may “valid” reason kang hindi ko nabanggit sa taas, it’s OK. You do you. Pero I implore you to reflect… really reflect if you’re just making excuses or not. I’m telling you this because I made tons of excused in the past and I suffered the consequences. That includes my mental health pero long story. Next time na lang. I don’t want the same thing to happen to you. Nakakalungkot. Nakakafrustrate. Nakakagalit sa sarili. No one should ever go through that. Now, whether you join almost a thousand email rebels or not, I hope we’re still friends especially after everything I said to you. I took the courage to write this loooooooooong email because I’d be doing you a disservice if I didn’t. That’s it. [Click here to enroll in EUI before it closes at 11:59pm TONIGHT.]( Rooting for you no matter what, Mark Darwin Balaswit Sent to: {EMAIL} [Unsubscribe]( Top Dog Copywriter, Barangay Commonwealth, 1121 Quezon City, Philippines

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