How to Bleed in the First Line

Vulnerability buys freedom. Freedom to look how I want, to say what I want, to do what I want. May 26, 2021 [UNSUBSCRIBE]( | [WEBSITE]( [Altucher Confidential] [Warning] Do you enjoy receiving Altucher Confidential? Please [Click Here Now]( so we know to continue sending you Altucher Confidential for free! “Vulnerability buys freedom. Freedom to look how I want, to say what I want, to do what I want.” [PAIN written in blood] How to Bleed in the First Line By James Altucher IMPORTANT UPDATE FROM JAMES ALTUCHER [Business professionals busy in front of stock tickers]( The media will blame the volatile markets on anything from the coronavirus to the election… [But something more sinister is causing them to swing up and down…]( One former hedge fund manager claims it has everything to do with the computers on Wall Street… [He explains everything in his short video here.]( Because I grew up ugly, I was always insecure about first impressions. "Ugly" was my boot camp for bleeding as fast as possible. Vulnerability buys freedom. Freedom to look how I want, to say what I want, to do what I want. I like to study first lines. They have to be powerful: a few simple words that compel us to read the next 300 pages. How do the authors do it? How can I do it? Here are 12 first lines from some of my favorite books and WHY they "bleed." "Mother died today. Or maybe yesterday; I can't be sure." — Albert Camus, The Stranger There's death, confusion, apathy. The entire book is in that first line. Why so unemotional over his mother's death? Why is being unsure so critical as we enter into the narrator's world? "I am an invisible man." — Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man Does he have super powers? Or is it a metaphor? How does being an invisible man justify his existence? Plus the direct simplicity as if he gave up. Why did he surrender so easily? Did the world beat it out of him? "I first met Dean not long after my wife and I split up. I had just gotten over a serious illness that I won't bother to talk about, except it had something to do with the miserably weary split-up and my feeling that everything was dead." — Jack Kerouac, On the Road He had an illness. A split with his wife. But these mean nothing compared to "I first met Dean." They aren't even worth talking about once he meets Dean. Things are about to change. Will he find meaning in Dean? Is Dean so important that it's not even worth talking about the serious illness or the breakup? "Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice." — Gabriel García Márquez, 100 Years of Solitude He's facing the firing squad. How did he get there? We're in the middle of the story. "Many years later." After what? This is the first line! Somehow it started with the discovery of ice — symbolic of cold, of the mysterious. He was a boy then (innocent), nostalgic ("father") and now he's a colonel about to be killed! The entire novel, once again, stuffed into that microcosm of a sentence. "The snow in the mountains was melting and Bunny had been dead for several weeks before we understood the gravity of our situation." Donna Tartt, The Secret History Three things about this sentence: "Snow melting" — idyllic. And "melting" — slowness, seasons changing, light, even hope. And yet, "Bunny had been dead" — horror — and not only dead but "for several weeks." And why did it take several weeks to "understand the gravity”? Cruelty, apathy in the idyllic. I like when a first line suggests we are spying in the very middle of a story. It's the difference between the Mona Lisa, where the entire painting is contained within the frame, and something like Nighthawks by Edward Hopper, where you feel there are many stories outside the frame that brought everyone into the diner. [Nighthawks, a painting by Edward Hopper] (Nighthawks by Edward Hopper) "All this happened, more or less." — Kurt Vonnegut, Slaughterhouse-Five "All this happened" — almost as if we will not believe it so the author insists it's true. Is it so horrible as to be unbelievable? And yet… "more or less." Well, did it happen or not? Is the narrator unreliable or will there be a reason he doesn't want to relay the story accurately? For some reason, the narrator warns us he might be unreliable. "It began the usual way, in the bathroom of the Lassimo Hotel." — Jennifer Egan, A Visit from the Goon Squad What is "it"? And what is "the usual way"? And when I think "the usual way" I don't think about bathrooms or hotels or, very specifically, the Lassimo Hotel. There's humor in the line because of the incongruity. The sentence sounds like a noir detective novel. We want to find out what "it" was, what is "usual," why "the bathroom" and why the specificity of "Lassimo.” Four questions in one line plus the noir feeling. "It began as a mistake." — Charles Bukowski, Post Office Such a simple line. Five words. Again, what is "it" and why was it a "mistake"? Also, it highlights the narrator's vulnerability. Should we trust him? We MUST continue in order to uncover the questions. No more banks. No more accountants. No more Wall Street? [computer code]( new type of Internet could change everything in the coming years… But your chance to profit from it could start in the coming days! [Click here for more details.]( "You are about to begin reading Italo Calvino's new book, 'If on a Winter's Night a Traveler.'” — Italo Calvino, If on a Winter's Night a Traveler He refers to himself and his book in the first line, breaking the fourth wall with the reader immediately. Is the narrator Italo Calvino? There's a paradox here: Did he write that line after writing the book or did he start the book that way. It's confusing but not so confusing you won't read on in order to satisfy your curiosity. "124 was spiteful.” — Toni Morrison, Beloved Why is someone named "124"? Is this even a person? Gives an unemotional feeling. And yet we also know in three words that "124" was "spiteful.” Which implies action. Why not angry? Why specifically is 124 filled with "spite"? Spite implies some action, like 124 wants to hurt someone. Spite implies you want someone to feel the pain you feel. As opposed to just feeling angry. Conveyed in just three words. “The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel." — William Gibson, Neuromancer A bad novel might start, "The sky above the port was the deepest of blues." Which is too obvious. Instead, "the color of television." What is the color of television? The color of a TV depends on the signal being sent. But the signal is "tuned to a dead channel" — why is it dead? The static we see on an old TV is the signal from the Big Bang. Unfathomable and yet that is what the narrator sees. Also, why a port? An entrance to another country. But in this case, an entrance into technology — a television. Life is going to change at this "port"al. "Vaughn died yesterday, in his last car crash." — J.G. Ballard, Crash A death just yesterday? Oddly unemotional. And "in his last car crash" implies there were other crashes before this. And the simplicity of the sentence feels like a lack of emotion. Why the lack of emotion? Why the directness? The reader is subconsciously caught off guard because more emotion and less directness is expected when someone dies. Imagine if someone you loved died yesterday — would you write the line like that? SUMMARY Elements of a great bleeding first line: - The first sentence often contains the seeds of the entire novel - The structure (simple vs. complex, confusing vs. direct) contains the emotions - Twisted. A mystery to unravel so you read further - Unique. Each of those lines are unique in all literature - Vulnerable. Again, vulnerability buys freedom. A great author uses this freedom to invite us on a journey. And once we set out on that journey, we know we are in for a wild ride. I hope studying this makes me a better writer. Sincerely, [James Altucher] James Altucher Warning: Financial Extinction Event Imminent July 14th, 2021, a seismic event is expected to send our financial system into a devastating tailspin. At this point, there’s nothing the Federal Reserve, the government or even the President can do to stop it… If you’re not prepared for what’s coming, you should do so now. 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